Talk:Madison Moss/@comment-10106799-20170515021420

Advice from an experienced "wikia-er": Don't put personal pronouns such as I, us, we (unless in quotes). Don't make the whole thing a run-on sentence. And lastly, put more effort overall.

Correcting myself; the place you used the pronouns seems to be a quote, but it's so horrifyingly unclear I couldn't understand it.